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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Unloved- Chapter 1 Savior (edited)

    You've probably heard this from others but some of the sentences are confusing. Just thought I'd point it out. But I like the story so far! :D

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: When they need her

    The story is good so far. It had grammar mistakes but so far good. :D

    Apr 30, 2008


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites